“You did it, I shall inform mother”, Tanu in assertive tone
“Do you think they will trust you”, Ruhi reverted ironically.
“You outsider, why you act as owner of the house. My wish, I will do what I like”, Ruhi picked up the pouch again.
“You may not consider me as elder sister but I do consider you as my younger one”, spoke Tanu holding her tears.
“Poor adopted girl!”, Ruhi said these three words again.
“She is my daughter and owns each right", mother patted Tanu while snatching the drug pouch from Ruhi.
That day, Tanu’s life changed forever.
This post is part of Blogchatter's MyFriendAlexa , where we are taking our blog to next level.
Manisha - Loved this micro-fiction, it was powerful and so well penned.
ReplyDeleteJust in 7 dialogues, you conveyed some deep emotions here. Sometimes, a warm pat on the back can convey many unspoken feelings.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a heart touching tale. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteVery interestingly done. You have managed to convey so much in such few words. Very impressive indeed.
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Adoption is so hard to accept for many people. My friend and cousin have adopted and they are living normally like everyone else. Their love for their children is even more than those who judge their decisions.
ReplyDeleteMy daughter keeps saying she will adopt and I am sure she will one day. You shared the tale well in such a short post.
ReplyDeleteSuch a short one but has an indepth meaning to it. It take time for children to accept but they do so after a while
ReplyDeletesindhu
Small yet very touchy! Beautiful story, you gave me an idea to participate in A to Z, I was avoiding till now due to the workload. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteLoved your attempt at micro fiction. Sometimes you need people to support you, lift you up. Sometimes the negativity from people can be toxic.
DeleteThis is really so.much heart touching..this time I'm missing this challenge due to commitments
ReplyDeleteSo powerful! It's not easy to convey the emotions in such a short tale but you did a great work here.
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