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Friday, 19 July 2019

Monsoon Ghost - #ShortStory


Lavanya, once again turned to see her house to gather the warmth so that she doesn’t miss it much. Her brother Atul who was watching her over-sensitive sister diverted her mind, “you can always see the house in the video chat; don’t be sentimental let's get into the car before you get late”.

Lavanya sighed, picked her backpack while her father arranged her luggage in the car and her mother shuffled keys to lock the multiple locks of the door while trying to control tears.

Lavanya was already missing every one even before stepping into the land of Monsoons for her post graduation, yes this is what she called Pune, which was best described to her by her cousins and seniors. 


Bidding adieu Lavanya took her flight with heavy heart from Udaipur and reached Pune where Purnima, Lavanya’s senior from school, received her to take her to PG where her room was booked.

Lavanya was a girl with fewer words and more of expressions; being helpful in nature she had many friends who would go an extra mile for her to do things in return. 

"Thanks Purnima, you have done everything here in Pune for a good start for my college", Lavanya thanked her senior.

“You are an angel for me dear, so no formalities plus we all here away from families so friends are extended families. You are welcome anytime for any sort of help my room is just one room adjacent to your right, room no. 567."

“Okay, and who is left of me, I mean in room no. 565; Is she from our school or ….”Lavanya's questions were silenced by Purnima’s gesture.

“Room number 565 is shut from past 3 years, some spooky story attached to it, but I don’t believe in it so you also don’t worry about it, start unpacking your stuff as you have to report college by 10 in morning. See you at dinner on 2nd floor”, Purnima left Lavanya to settle her things.



Lavanya started arranging her desk, cupboard then left for quick dinner and was about to sleep after arranging all papers in a file for submission at the college she heard a knock at the door. 

Thinking Purnima might have dropped in, she opened the door but to her surprise, no one was there. "Maybe someone was in hurry", she chuckled and came to rest to her bed and closed her eyes. A loud thunderstruck made her awake again and she rushed to the window to see the rain splashing all over and making place look heavenly. She saw a girl standing in the rain for a moment and the next moment she wasn’t there. Taking few deep breaths Lavanya retired to bed thinking it’s her imagination and posed a smile while rain drops making a unique song as a lullaby to her.

Next day, her first day at college went smooth as expected, but when she returned to her PG she saw a girl staring at her across the road. 


Lavanya frowned and turned back to have a clear look of the girl as rain was making it difficult to see. She disappeared like last night. While Lavanya was walking on the pathway she heard a voice saying, “Help Me”.

Little scared, Lavanya gathered courage to turn but no one was present but the moment she turned back, the same girl was standing right in front of her.

Shockingly Lavanya asked, “Who are you? what kind of help you want?”

The wet girl pointed towards the post boxes arranged on the wall in two rows each numbered in the order of room numbers of the PG particularly towards 565.

Lavanya walked towards the post boxes and opened box no. 565 where she found 10-12 letters dated a year back. 

The girl pointed her to read those letters. Lavanya sat on a stool next to her, started reading the letters and tears started rolling out continuously. She was so emotional reading them that she forgot about the ghost like girl she was scared of.  The letters were from a cancer patient who was a pen friend of that girl residing in 565. She always motivated her through her poetry and the pen friend looked forward for her letters. The latest letter told that the patient is not battling hard but has a strong will power to bounce back and was worried as she did not receive any letters from roomie 565.

Lavanya for a moment mused about the girl and decided to go on with her gut feeling. She went to her room and started writing poetry for pen friend and posted it.

While she was returning from post office in heavy rain she heard ‘Thank you’ in a hush voice, this time she was not scared but smiled contently to help the Monsoon Ghost. This letter tradition continued through out Lavanya’s studies and her pen friend once wrote that she has braved the fight and now going back to her hometown, a village where she determines to teach the true spirit of living is the will power. 

Lavanya's PG course was also complete and she was also placed with reputed institution as a ‘Wellness Coach’ in her hometown. The two years of her PG life she had made a best friend and always remembered the 565 room number girl in Monsoons to whom she called Monsoon Ghost. Lavanya never shared this incident with anyone for she believed it could not be explained in words what she felt about humanity connections.

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This blog is a part of the #BirthdayBlogTrain hosted by Gunjan Upadhyay http://tuggunmommy.com/ and Neha Sharma http://growingwithnemit.com/.  4 picture prompts were given from that we choose the girl standing in the rain. 


I would like to thank Snighdha Prusti from www.beauttyobessions.com for introducing me to this blog train and would further like to introduce Disha Mehrota from www.lifemyway.in to share her take on the prompts.

@MeenalSonal

32 comments:

  1. This is awesome story

    Ghost is not scary at all

    Some wants attention some got confused

    Rest it's an emotional and touching story

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    1. Thanks Anurag, yes this ghost is not scary.

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  2. Such a spooky and heart touching story. Really loved this blogpost. :)

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  3. First the loved the name of post"Monsoon ghost", it raises a curiosity among readers. you had done complete justice to prompt and title. very well written. #GWNxTNM

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    1. These kind words are going to ring in our ears for this weekend. Thanks a bunch Surbhi :)

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  4. A few incidences leave a deep mark on our memories. They teach a some valuable life lessons.glad that Lavanya made a special friend.:-)

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    1. A single incident do change perspective of person.

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  5. Monsoon story and her story is going to stay with me for long. Glad how the stereotyped ghosts have a different shade too.

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    1. Happy that we could give a lighter shade to ghost.

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  6. That is one interesting story.Lavanaya was surely a brave and kind hearted girl. 💫

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    1. Yes a brave heart can always be kind to others as kindness is act of bravery.

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  7. First ghost story I was not scared while reading. Nice reading!

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    1. This is emotional spooky story. Thanks Aditi for dropping by.

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  8. Interesting read.. Absolutely different .. U gave a lovely twist to this prompt

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  9. What a thoroughly unique and interesting take on the prompt! I’m glad it was a positive ghost story!
    www.nooranandchawla.com

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    1. Thanks Noor, yes as positive bloggers we made our too positive :)

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  10. Wow this is so thoughtful of Lavanya and loved the spooky elements as well.

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    1. Lavanya continued the work of ghost, thanks for appreciating.

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  11. Amazing story. Great narration. Unknown buddies became great friends maybe the ghost wanted her friend to have another special friend since she would not have been around anymore.

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  13. Lovely story. Very different. Cancer is such a dreaded disease that any support from anyone is a blessing in disguise.

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  14. A ghost with a soft heart! We don't read many positive stories around ghost. This is a short and beautifully written piece.

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  15. Nice story and a good read. I enjoy this ghost story 😊

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  16. totally different way of taking the monsoon concept. I loved reading the story.

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  17. I like the heading of the post.. The story is alsobvery much interesting...

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  18. Wow.. such a nice read.. I was glued tightly till the end.

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  19. Nice plot didi and Sonal... Liked the writing too... My best wishes to both of you.

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  20. Monsoons, rains, ghosts, scary, heartfelt...lovely combo and nice take on the prompt. Keep the good work going you two.

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