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Saturday, 22 September 2018

My Solace - Haibun


Sometimes we have to move away from our surroundings to recognize the bundle of energy with in. Self analysis in me time is what does wonders.
It's only time and perspective one needs to look inside for all questions to be answered. 



Questions raised within 
Analyzed answered many 
 Solace evolve me



The above poetry is Haibun. Haibun is a combination of Haiku/Tanka with a prose. Want to know more about Haiku, read here.

Sharing this poetry with Heeding Haiku with Chèvrefeuille, where challenge was to write a revised of haiku of below master piece

In these drops of dew
Let me wash as a trial
The dust of this world.

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 Where do you find solace? Where do you look for your answers? Do share with us your thoughts on this subject in the comments section below.

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8 comments:

  1. Anmol Rawat22 September 2018 at 13:40

    Good one!

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  2. Jules22 September 2018 at 19:42

    Jules from WP... Fun with Science...(I have a blogspot for ease of commenting) -

    Sometimes I think we over analyze our lives. We also need to remember to forgive ourselves :)

    I like how you incorporated cleansing of self in your haibun.

    I'd visit...but I don't tweet. Good luck with that adventure.

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    1. MeenalSonal23 September 2018 at 08:10

      Hey that's great Jules. Yes we sometimes over analyze, so we need quiet time for ourselves to listen to inner voice. Thanks for your wishes.

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  3. Pri24 September 2018 at 12:21

    Indeed! Most of the answers are found within. Nice one :)

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  4. Supriya24 September 2018 at 16:52

    very nice poem

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  5. Preeti's Panorama24 September 2018 at 18:19

    I am not into such forms of poetry but this creation of yours did affect me. Sometimes to find yourself you have to seek answers from your ownself. #readbypreetispanorama for #MyFriendAlexa

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  6. Sona25 September 2018 at 13:48

    You introduced me to Haibun today. I liked the theme: solitude.

    I think we truly find ourselves only when we are ready to delve deeper within the self. I find that in my nature walks .

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