Sometimes
we have to move away from our surroundings to recognize the bundle of energy
with in. Self analysis in me time is what does wonders.
It's
only time and perspective one needs to look inside for all questions to be answered.
Questions raised within
Analyzed answered many
Solace evolve me
The above poetry is Haibun. Haibun is a combination of Haiku/Tanka with a prose. Want to know more about Haiku, read here.
Sharing this poetry with Heeding Haiku with Chèvrefeuille, where challenge was to write a revised of haiku of below master piece
In these drops of dew
Let me wash as a trial
The dust of this world.
Let me wash as a trial
The dust of this world.
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Where do you find solace? Where do you look for your answers? Do share with us your thoughts on this subject in the comments section below.
Where do you find solace? Where do you look for your answers? Do share with us your thoughts on this subject in the comments section below.
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Good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anmol for dropping by.
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ReplyDeleteSometimes I think we over analyze our lives. We also need to remember to forgive ourselves :)
I like how you incorporated cleansing of self in your haibun.
I'd visit...but I don't tweet. Good luck with that adventure.
Hey that's great Jules. Yes we sometimes over analyze, so we need quiet time for ourselves to listen to inner voice. Thanks for your wishes.
DeleteIndeed! Most of the answers are found within. Nice one :)
ReplyDeletevery nice poem
ReplyDeleteI am not into such forms of poetry but this creation of yours did affect me. Sometimes to find yourself you have to seek answers from your ownself. #readbypreetispanorama for #MyFriendAlexa
ReplyDeleteYou introduced me to Haibun today. I liked the theme: solitude.
ReplyDeleteI think we truly find ourselves only when we are ready to delve deeper within the self. I find that in my nature walks .