When heart falls apart,
tears & grief up on the chart.
One magical touch of her,
makes oceans stand behind her.
When food seems tasteless,
even herb & sause sprinkled
priceless.
One defined touch of her,
makes simple bread delicious.
When huge home looks haunted,
every corner is disoriented.
One thoughtful touch of her,
makes meek hut shine like palace.
When tough tasks challenge world,
increases tension among the herd.
One mindful decision of her,
task completes bit by bit in cheer.
When a situation looks frozen,
no hope or direction to lighten.
One pleasant touch of her,
melts millions heart & stays
unbeaten.
World’s treasure fades away,
When her smiles makes a way.
Precious jewels looks dull,
when her aura starts to dwell.
Those who laughed at her,
now stand to applaud her.
As they know WOMAN is real jewel,
polished with perfection to spread
its magical spell.
oh wow what a way to appreciate womanhood :) awesome indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shweta, glad to see your comment :)
DeleteI can see how this poem might fit a "money" prompt as in valuing women! It is a pleasure to read this on a day dedicated to women.
ReplyDeleteYes Susan, WOMAN are incomparable. Thanks for your kind words.
DeleteThis reminds me of the saying "a good woman is precious as rubies."
ReplyDeleteSherry, your thought completes my poem :)
Deletebeautiful one,loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotirmoy :)
DeleteBeautiful. An apt tribute to womanhood!
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna, glad you liked it :)
DeleteI can agree with that!
ReplyDeleteThanks Bekkie :)
DeleteThis is a wonderful homage to Woman on the special day. A nice one, specially love the details.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :)
DeleteIt is a magical poem that speaks about the importance of women. What better way to express this. The words, musings, rhymes everything is just awesome.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful ode to all the women of the world. May they continue to spread cheer, warmth, love and comfort all around them and more power to them!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful read about womanhood the poem is worth reading cheers to the power of women... Well written..
ReplyDeleteEach line of your poem was unique and written with love. Very creative indeed. A happy advance Womens day to you
ReplyDeleteSuch a wonderful poem.... women have powers no man can match up to. The ability to bear pain at birthing to periods pain.. yet smile and carry on with life like nothing just happened. That's what women are... the most powerful being in this world.
ReplyDeleteA lovely ode to women on women's day!!. i always admire people who can pen beautiful poetry and this is one of them.
ReplyDeleteWhat a way to describe a woman this Women's Day. Each and every line reminds me of my Mom. A woman can do evrything.
ReplyDeleteA lovely ode to womanhood. I find poems to be such a lovely way to express the depth of emotions and being.
ReplyDeletea sweet read :)
Women indeed breathe life in a house and make it a home. They keep a family together and are a constant source of love and support. Beautiful poem and what an ode to women!
ReplyDeletesuch a wonderful poem and perfect for the occasion of woman's day. women are powerful and strongest pioneer of society. they can manage many things all together and can fight with odds bravely.
ReplyDeleteLoved the poem on women. Women are super and when they are a mother they become superwomen. Women multitask so well. Ever caught a man multi-tasking?
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful way to celebrate a day dedicated to women. Women are indeed multi-taskers and they are the one who keeps family together.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a well-written piece. Describing a woman is the most difficult thing to do. You can't fit her in one role or few words.
ReplyDeleteThoughtful and well written. Yes a woman can do wonders with her empathetic mind and a beautiful vision.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is actually a tribute to womanhood and I loved the way you have chosen words to describe the power a woman carry!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely piece and adorable writing on Women's Day. You guys are a huge inspiration to all the mothers struggling and trying to grow and live a better life. Women had a very huge role in my life both professionaly and personally. My bosses had been all women majorily and my sister and mother has always been the ones I can count on. Happy Women's Day to all. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautiful way to celebrate womanhood. The way you have penned down the poem is just fantastic
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful choice of words for a woman. She has no role left behind and no more words to describe what she hasn't done
ReplyDeleteSindhu
What a beautiful poem on women on women's day. So aptly put, the words are just amazing.
ReplyDeleteMagical ..too good ❤️
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written on women's day.appropriate words used to convey the message.amazing ..always in love with your writing
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