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Thursday, 15 March 2018

Flaming Past


Jolted past in vicious events
now entirely burnt in fire
for desire to see novella path
urge to walk plainly without prejudices 
Source 
World accept present forget past
new life old skin ready to shine
when smile combine no looking back
as past flames diminish.
Do you have past events that haunt you till now? If yes just set them on fire and move ahead in life.

 This poetry is Quadrille, which consists of 44 words, 22 words in each para.

 Sharing this poetry with Mindlovemisery Photo promt #205 , Indispire#212 - #FollowPresent & dVerse Poets Pub - Quadrille - Lets Fire Up

@Sonal


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10 comments:

  1. De Jackson15 March 2018 at 20:45

    Wow! That's quite an effective prompt mashup! I especially love:
    "new life old skin ready to shine"

    Just gorgeous.

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  2. Frank Hubeny16 March 2018 at 00:11

    Interesting how the past flames diminish.

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    1. MeenalSonal17 March 2018 at 16:28

      Yes Frank past flames slowly fly away when present breeze is strong.

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  3. Alana16 March 2018 at 17:22

    The images of fire are so vivid, showing well the pain of those discriminated against. But then they rise. This shows well the power of poetry.

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  4. Shirley Corder16 March 2018 at 22:53

    Beautiful but nostalgic words! Thank you for sharing.
    Thankful Thursday Week 11 and Rescue a Post

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    1. MeenalSonal6 April 2018 at 16:46

      Past always welcomes nostalgia...keep visiting!

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  5. Anonymous17 March 2018 at 05:40

    It's nearly impossible to find knowledgeable people on this subject,
    however, you sound like you know what you're talking about!
    Thanks

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    1. MeenalSonal6 April 2018 at 16:47

      Thank You....would be more happy to know you.

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  6. MeenalSonal17 March 2018 at 16:29

    Thanks Jyotirmoy :)

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Your each word matters! So drop a word or two :)