Thursday, 15 March 2018

Flaming Past


Jolted past in vicious events
now entirely burnt in fire
for desire to see novella path
urge to walk plainly without prejudices 
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World accept present forget past
new life old skin ready to shine
when smile combine no looking back
as past flames diminish.


Do you have past events that haunt you till now? If yes just set them on fire and move ahead in life.

This poetry is Quadrille, which consists of 44 words, 22 words in each para.

Sharing this poetry with Mindlovemisery Photo promt #205 , Indispire#212 - #FollowPresent & dVerse Poets Pub - Quadrille - Lets Fire Up

@Sonal


10 comments:

  1. Wow! That's quite an effective prompt mashup! I especially love:
    "new life old skin ready to shine"

    Just gorgeous.

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  2. Interesting how the past flames diminish.

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    1. Yes Frank past flames slowly fly away when present breeze is strong.

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  3. The images of fire are so vivid, showing well the pain of those discriminated against. But then they rise. This shows well the power of poetry.

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    1. Past always welcomes nostalgia...keep visiting!

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  5. It's nearly impossible to find knowledgeable people on this subject,
    however, you sound like you know what you're talking about!
    Thanks

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    1. Thank You....would be more happy to know you.

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Your each word matters! So drop a word or two :)