No matter where I go
At every corner of the heart I grow
At childhood I am a miniscule in
nature
But I nurture in a gigantic way as
one mature
Some possess me more whereas little
seen in few
Right attitude can surely gives me a
blow
Mind can always make me to bow
But sometimes I overpower in show
Good deeds do not ever look at me
A cunning mind always has my backing
for free
At times I dig several pits and low
down voice
Walking with me may not be
comfortable choice
Only one can defeat me in the entire
creation
Courage is the
one that makes me evaporate with a notion.
Still guessing who am I that take
many on a spree?
Who takes away dreams with
aspirations for free?
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I am FEAR that peeps in you
When your mind pampers negative hue.
I am participating in Write Tribe October Problogger challenge, today's prompt - Courage over Comfort
@Meenal
well, that is a very smart take on the prompt. And yes, once I read who it was, went back and re-read it from the beginning and it makes total sense.
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DeleteThat's such a fantastic take on the prompt, Meenal. I read it twice and marveled at the way you have woven this riddle.
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Deletenice one, really nice poem on fear.So think positive and let courage peep in.
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DeleteTill the end I kept on guessing!You kept the secret so tightly closed from the guessing minds!
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DeleteSuch a wonderful take on the prompt and so beautifully written. Fear resides in every heart but weather to let it overpower you is your choice.
ReplyDeleteFear is all mind game,it keeps growing if not suppressed.
DeleteI am seriously bad with riddles. An interesting poem, beautifully worded.
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DeleteRiddles are mind boggling...thank you for dropping by!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem - and hold so true for this monster caller FEAR. I remember once my granny told me - Monsters possess ONLY those who lack faith & courage.
ReplyDeletetoday remembering her wise words via your poem. Lovely.
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DeleteI did not guess what it was, till you revealed it in the end!
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Happy that we could keep the answer wrapped till the end.
DeleteThis is a great piece of writing. Till last I could not crack it. Yes, fear is there inside all of us. Some conquer it well and others get supressed by it.
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