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Saturday, 22 April 2017

Sparkling Solitude

Walking unaided
I assemble my thoughts

Over silent sea
Drizzle plays euphoric sound
 
Photo Prompt
I need your deepness
To prioritize dreams

To learn how to balance
Relations with perfect colour

I need your wisdom
For appropriate pathway

Solitude my hero 
love you everlastingly

Your presence builds view
Clearly answering questions


You are my truthful mentor


The above is the Choka poetry which is formed by writing alternately 5 /7 syllable couplets and then ending the poem with an extra seven-syllable line.

Writing for #AtoZChallenge April 2017, Day 19 - Letter S - S for Solitude
Writing for  Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie and Saturday Mix  prompt.

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7 comments:

  1. Charleen22 April 2017 at 23:58

    This reads like a prayer. Very pretty.

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  2. Unknown23 April 2017 at 05:46

    A lovely flow!!!

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  3. Bastet's Waka Library23 April 2017 at 13:20

    Beautifully executed ... a lovely use of both the photo and the choka.

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  4. Raivenne23 April 2017 at 21:53

    It reads like a mantra of sorts. A psalm given before you look within to meditate.

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  5. Unknown24 April 2017 at 16:58

    Such a lovely flow of the poem..Beautifully expressed

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  6. Lorraine24 April 2017 at 18:25

    My first reading of a choka -- follows like meditation, mantra. Interesting poetic form.

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  7. Unknown25 April 2017 at 19:03

    Those are beautiful thoughts, nicely weaved in the shape of a poem! Thanks for sharing.

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    Regards,
    Pikakshi
    Readers of the Night

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