Walking unaided
I assemble my thoughts
Over silent sea
Drizzle plays euphoric sound
I need your deepness
To prioritize dreams
To
learn how to balance
Relations
with perfect colour
I need
your wisdom
For appropriate
pathway
Solitude
my hero
love
you everlastingly
Your
presence builds view
Clearly
answering questions
You are
my truthful mentor
The above is the Choka poetry which is formed by writing alternately 5 /7 syllable couplets and then ending the poem with an extra seven-syllable line.
Writing for #AtoZChallenge April 2017, Day 19 - Letter S - S for Solitude
Writing for Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie and Saturday Mix prompt.
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This reads like a prayer. Very pretty.
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Beautifully executed ... a lovely use of both the photo and the choka.
ReplyDeleteIt reads like a mantra of sorts. A psalm given before you look within to meditate.
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My first reading of a choka -- follows like meditation, mantra. Interesting poetic form.
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Regards,
Pikakshi
Readers of the Night