In pitch darkness of fear and ambiguity, my heart starts
shivering in search of a rescuer; then a thin clear light shows up stretching itself
to guide me and tells me I am here to hold you as lighthouse gives hopes to
sinking boat.
My soul the savior
Enlightens the correct path
Propose direction
The above poetry is Haibun(Prose+Haiku/Tanka). I have chosen Haiku to club with prose.
Writing for #AtoZChallenge April 2017, Day 12 - L for Lighthouse & sharing with
@Sonal
Poignant and well written. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinodini, glad you liked it :))
DeleteThis is the first time i heard of something called Haibun, its nice
ReplyDeleteTina
Yes Tina, this form of poetry is both fun and challenge to write.
DeleteBeautiful haibun. Haibun gives you the opportunity to tell more than you can do ever in a haiku or tanka. Very strong.
ReplyDeleteYes Haibun makes it look like a whole package.
DeleteThanks Kristjaan.