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Friday, 7 August 2015

Echo Logic

This post has won WOW badge from Blogadda for the topic Inspiration Is Within

My echo make me strong,
strong enough to hear the truth,
this is somewhere hidden,
deep buried in cries and mayhem.

My echo make me strong,
interrupt me for a while,
entwine me with a question,
as to why I feel frightened.
My echo make me strong...

My echo make me strong,
help me out of a scampered path and filth,
every step moved in a direction,
leads to a beautiful dawn of satisfaction.

My echo make me strong,
to stand alone in the crowd,
Let not addicted to plundering situations,
Face them with zealous defiance.

My echo make me strong,
take me to the world I dreamt,
where every eye is bright with audacity and hope,
where every heart is bound by cheerful rope.
@ Meenal
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
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Sharing with 3WWW week no.439 and Blog A Rhythm
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Posted earlier sharing with Indispire Edition 91 #Poem
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23 comments:

  1. Sheilagh Lee8 August 2015 at 05:31

    beautiful

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  2. Tina Acharya6 September 2015 at 23:07

    Awesome!!!The last stanza is just superb!!!!

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  3. Hema10 September 2015 at 15:24

    Truly inspiring.. Good choose of words.. And congrats for WOW.. :-)

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  4. Tomichan Matheikal18 November 2015 at 20:29

    Love the optimism and cheerfulness in it.

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    1. MeenalSonal1 December 2018 at 17:38

      Thanks a lot Tomichan, it means a lot coming from you.

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  5. Alpana28 November 2018 at 10:20

    Loved your take and choice of words. It's beautiful poem.

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    1. MeenalSonal1 December 2018 at 17:40

      Thanks a lot Alpana for your appreciating words.

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  6. Pooja28 November 2018 at 14:13

    I have liked the line, that echo makes you strong and gives courage
    To stand against all odds

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    1. MeenalSonal1 December 2018 at 17:40

      Yes Pooja, echo does make us strong, it's only that we need to hear it.

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  7. Pooja28 November 2018 at 14:14

    I have liked the line, that echo makes you strong and gives courage
    To stand against all odds

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  8. Gurjeet chhabra28 November 2018 at 16:46

    very beautiful motivational poem. love each word of it

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  9. Richa Mina28 November 2018 at 16:48

    Great poem, displaying positivity and love. I totally love it

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    1. MeenalSonal2 December 2018 at 16:03

      Yes positivity in each phase fills us with more strength to conquer the world.

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  10. Ritu Kalra28 November 2018 at 18:57

    I really love the way it has been penned down...such beautiful thoughts and so true...should always believe in inner voice

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    1. MeenalSonal2 December 2018 at 16:03

      Inner voice is the true voice and should never be ignored.

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  11. Manas Mukul28 November 2018 at 22:51

    Nice take on the WOW prompt. It is always refreshing to read a poem with nice lines.
    #ContemplationOfaJoker #Jokerophilia

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    1. MeenalSonal2 December 2018 at 16:04

      Thanks Manas, this prompt was so special to us that words flowed in this poetry.

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  12. Priyal28 November 2018 at 23:31

    Loved the line of this poem, its a beautiful poem. Wish if someday I too write a poem like this

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    1. MeenalSonal2 December 2018 at 16:05

      Thanks Priyal, of course you can write poems; you have good choice of words in your post.

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