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Keshav was crawling hastily to reach end of the cable tunnel, he paused when surprisingly heard a voice saying “ponder again of your whole deed, will it give you peace”.
Keshav was crawling hastily to reach end of the cable tunnel, he paused when surprisingly heard a voice saying “ponder again of your whole deed, will it give you peace”.
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He looked around the aloof tunnel, shut his temporary good side thinking it is
utter nonsense and missed connection with inner self.
He then searched bag he
robbed at the railway station.
Bag contained few pictures,
documents and timeworn laptop.
He was shocked to see his
father’s visiting card in the bag; he was disgusted to feel that he missed
connection again.
#Word Count - 92
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@Sonal
It was the voice of his inner conscience.
ReplyDeleteInner conscience always correct us.
DeleteImagine stealing his father's bag!
ReplyDeleteYes, that is what was very shocking for him.
DeletePerfect! It's his guilt and as Kalpana Solsi says "its the sound of his inner conscience"
ReplyDeleteTrue Uma,inner conscience is what one should always listen to.
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