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Wednesday, 4 February 2015

What is Essence of True Love?

Adore
Blissful journey
Tangled eternally
Happiness for life
True Love

Worship
Selfless nature
Bestowing merrily
Infinite positivity
True Love

Joint hearts
Tower of care
Romance brimming in air
Tingling tiny beats rocking high
True Love


This poem is form of Cinquain  which follows 2/4/6/8/2 syllable count. 


Sharing with BJ’s Shadorma & Beyond and MindLoveMisery’s Menagerie &Two Tuesday#116 - Tangled / Tower
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43 comments:

  1. Blog It Or Lose It4 February 2015 at 23:55

    This is so sweet! Thank you for trying the cinquain! So glad to hear that you liked the form :)

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    1. MeenalSonal5 February 2015 at 12:23

      The form took me to define Love in different forms. Thank you for sharing such poetry forms with us

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  2. Josie Two Shoes5 February 2015 at 07:26

    "Blissful journey, tangled eternally"... what a beautiful way to express the binding of two hearts together! Your poem was very well done!

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    1. MeenalSonal5 February 2015 at 12:24

      Thanks Josie,I must say your word prompts made it more beautiful :)

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  3. Old Egg5 February 2015 at 15:55

    It is always interesting to read what others write of love. It is a delight to see expression that I myself would not use being so effective. One of the joys of blogging is discovering new ways of writing (as well as poetry forms of course!)

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    1. MeenalSonal8 February 2015 at 19:28

      Absolutely Egg, blogging makes us learn new thing every day. And yes others views make us ponder for some time.

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  4. Romi5 February 2015 at 18:21

    Your concise poem is full of love.

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  5. Arti5 February 2015 at 21:10

    Cinquain - I am so glad to have learnt something new today. This was a very beautiful read, thanks for sharing it with us, Meenal :)

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    1. MeenalSonal8 February 2015 at 19:27

      Glad you liked it Arti, keep visiting often :)

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  6. Saru Singhal5 February 2015 at 21:24

    This is so beautiful. Love in its various forms.

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    1. MeenalSonal8 February 2015 at 19:25

      Yes Saru, love in it's every form is beautiful

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  7. Mary Hill6 February 2015 at 00:11

    Thank you. I needed love and simplicity today.

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    1. MeenalSonal8 February 2015 at 19:26

      Great that we could spread love through this poetry and it reached you in time :)

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  8. Anonymous6 February 2015 at 02:16

    Yes. I am going to say it. I LOVE this post. Your poem is lovely as is the link to the other post about love. It makes the world go round. Giving it and receiving it. That is all that is important in life. So uplifting!

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    1. Amrita Sabat6 February 2015 at 09:57

      Cinquain is new form of poem I learnt thnx 2 U! Gr8 one!

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    2. MeenalSonal8 February 2015 at 19:22

      Thank you Val, for the appreciation, glad you liked it.

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    3. MeenalSonal8 February 2015 at 19:24

      Amrita, @MindloveMisery's we always try new form. It's like stretching your boundaries.

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  9. Unknown6 February 2015 at 14:35

    Nice Ciquain there, and truly and essence of love, I have nominated you for the versatile award, please see your nomination here http://www.sunshineandzephyr.com/2015/02/sisterhood-of-the-world-bloggers-award/

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    1. MeenalSonal8 February 2015 at 19:19

      Thanks Shweta for kind words and nominating us for 'Versatile Blog Award'.

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  10. humbird7 February 2015 at 06:55

    Neat and fragile...

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  11. Patricia9 February 2015 at 10:38

    I have never heard of this form of poetry. Your poem is quite beautiful.

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    1. MeenalSonal23 December 2016 at 23:54

      Thank you Patricia, and I am happy that my poem conveyed my feelings well :)

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  12. Alpana13 February 2020 at 19:14

    Tangled externally..I love these two words a lot. Who says Love is complicated. It's our own way of interpreting after all..and I liked your interpretation

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  13. Cindy D'Silva15 February 2020 at 14:02

    Cinquain is quite a concept. Just read more on it. Will see if i can also attempt it some day coz the poet in me also wakes up sometimes. Thanks for introducing this to us.

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    1. MeenalSonal16 February 2020 at 00:21

      Try it out Cindy, will wait to read your poetic side.

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  14. Ruchi Mayank Verma15 February 2020 at 16:23

    I just love the way you have explained the meaning of true love ...it's all about sharing and feeling true love!!

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  15. Aspiring Hope15 February 2020 at 17:57

    I love your sweet poems with strong messages. Today definition of love is totally changed. I wish for your pure version of love.

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  16. Pragnya15 February 2020 at 17:59

    Alpana said it here, it's tangled.Your Cinquain is well attempted beautiful form.

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  17. Amrita15 February 2020 at 22:59

    I believe love needs balance .Such a lovely poem to read over the weekend

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  18. Snigdha Prusti16 February 2020 at 04:54

    Love surely need balance . you gave done a great job here. Very nice poem.

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  19. Reubenna Dutta16 February 2020 at 08:49

    Thats a lovely poem, true to the spirit of tbe month. I had tried to attempt my hands on Cinquin which failed miserably.

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  20. Tina Basu16 February 2020 at 09:28

    You have written some lovely lines on love. Its always nice to read on love.

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  21. Varsh16 February 2020 at 09:30

    I didn't know about this form of poem. Written beautifully and so full of expressions!

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  22. AmritKaur_Amy16 February 2020 at 11:36

    Love a beautiful feeling that can have many face as everyone has their own thoughts and feelings for love.

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  23. The Reading Momster16 February 2020 at 22:38

    so many thoughts expressed in such few lines! LOVE it! :)

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  24. notjustmommying17 February 2020 at 05:25

    Love writing poetry, but hadn't heard of cinquain before.. loved your attempt on it

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