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Thursday, 8 January 2015

Sunflower Haiku

Golden blush delight
Bright petals swaying to greet
Stand facing the sun

Sunflower - Haiku

Dew droplets shimmer
Like pearls scattered all-around
Gladden every heart 

@ Meenal

Heeding Haiku with HA and Mindlovesmisery’s Menagerie.

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12 comments:

  1. Debi Swim8 January 2015 at 16:31

    They are both beautiful Haiku but the second really touches my heart.
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    1. MeenalSonal10 January 2015 at 23:07

      Thanks Debi, this was my first attempt for Haiku.

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  2. Bastet's Waka Library8 January 2015 at 17:15

    Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading these sunny haiku very much! :-) Bastet.

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  3. Jules8 January 2015 at 18:03

    Very nice. I too try to think outside the box.
    Your pieces brightened up my cold morning.
    It is about 9 F or -12 C here.

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    1. MeenalSonal10 January 2015 at 23:09

      Thanks Jules, glad that Haiku brightened your morning.

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  4. vivinfrance9 January 2015 at 21:46

    So cheerful to read on this gloomy evening.

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    1. MeenalSonal10 January 2015 at 23:09

      Thank you Vivin France; happy that I could spread happiness aura :)

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  5. The Solitary Writer10 January 2015 at 12:03

    Beauty of a Sun flower captured in terms of words .

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  6. Maniparna13 January 2015 at 01:50

    Beautiful set...liked the phrase "golden blush'' very much... :-)

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    1. MeenalSonal16 January 2015 at 10:52

      Welcome to blog Maniparna, happy you liked it.
      Golden blush is what instantly strikes me when I see sunflower, so penned it :)

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