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Friday, 16 January 2015

Is Smile Immortal?

I go where my feet take me along to explore the life and myself.

Expecting the tough
being genuine in search
I portray myself
 
Others Offering
distract me frequently but
My heart keeps pacing 

Being modest though
I question even my smile
Is that immortal? 

Is there Life past death
but my present asks me to
act before I die

This is a haibun(prose + haiku/tanka), I have chosen Haiku to club with prose.

Sharing with 3WWW#410- Distracted, Genuine, Modest, Two Shoes in Texas#113 – Expect or Expire, Five Sentence Fiction – Offering, Indispre#48– Life after death, Poetry Jam - Shoes or Feet & HeedingHaikuWithHA and MindLoveMisery’sMenagerie.
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24 comments:

  1. Tanishq16 January 2015 at 20:46

    Very well written!

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    1. MeenalSonal17 January 2015 at 19:09

      Thanks for dropping by Tanishq, seems you know the topics bloggers love to blog at Indispire.

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  2. Ravish Mani16 January 2015 at 21:23

    Liked the use of haikus to deliver a clear message :)

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    1. MeenalSonal17 January 2015 at 19:10

      Clarity on such issue is difficult, tried to answer to some extent.

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  3. Aseem17 January 2015 at 04:55

    Now that's a lovely message. Well done :).

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    1. MeenalSonal17 January 2015 at 19:10

      Welcome to the blog Aseem, and thanks for your kind words.

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  4. Gabriella17 January 2015 at 05:16

    You seem to have included so many prompts here this is amazing!

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    1. MeenalSonal17 January 2015 at 19:11

      Yes Gabriella, prompts brings out the best in me ;)

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  5. Mary17 January 2015 at 06:04

    Your FEET take you interesting places indeed!

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    1. MeenalSonal17 January 2015 at 19:12

      Surely Mary, and many times to fantasy land too :)

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  6. alan170417 January 2015 at 16:32

    a world of adventures and questions on the path of life.

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    1. MeenalSonal17 January 2015 at 19:13

      Alan, Questions keep the excitement alive in life :)

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  7. Brian Miller17 January 2015 at 18:57

    it is good that we explore life...it helps us understand and to see the patterns how we figure out how life works....

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    1. MeenalSonal17 January 2015 at 19:16

      Exploring i sone of the key to answer many hidden questions as well.
      Thank you Brian Miller for your kind words :)

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  8. Jules17 January 2015 at 20:17

    We are often 'distracted' by what others see as the best for themselves - not necessarily 'us'.

    Always be true to your good self, question and answer, learn and teach. What lies beyond is a mystery I will wait for. ;)

    Thanks for stopping by. Continue exploring everyday!

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    1. MeenalSonal21 January 2015 at 12:27

      Yes Jules, sometimes the best suggestion for one can turn out the worst for another.
      Self exploring and analysis shall only be great teacher in subject called "Life".
      Thanks for your detailed comment :)

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  9. Josie Two Shoes18 January 2015 at 02:06

    I love the searching you portray here, we are always on a journey to know more about life and our inner selves!

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    1. MeenalSonal21 January 2015 at 12:28

      Yes Josie journey to explore and I feel it continues to be never ending.

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  10. Peggy19 January 2015 at 11:06

    What an interesting form and you seemed to pull it off quite well. And do we portray ourselves? Good question.

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    1. MeenalSonal21 January 2015 at 12:29

      Thank you Peggy.
      Questions lead to innovations :)

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  11. Anonymous19 January 2015 at 20:06

    Thoughtful writing. Thanks for sharing your words with us this week. :-)
    -HA

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    1. MeenalSonal21 January 2015 at 12:30

      Thanks for the lovely prompt, that I came up with this post :)

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  12. Unknown20 January 2015 at 14:49

    Nice poems... a distinct contrast between perception and reality. really liked it.

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    1. MeenalSonal21 January 2015 at 12:28

      Thank you Shweta for your kind words, glad you liked it :)

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