In this riddle you need to guess what are the mighty two, talked about in this poem. Clues of riddle are given inform of poem stanza's and answer is present at the end of poem.
It is the one which holds you tight
It is one which shows path right
Both together, can
do miracle
A simple thing can turn a wonder
Together as a companion smart
Greets you for a lovely start
When joined at a sacred
place
Our strength sums up with grace
Its embrace is so dearest though
Love and peace jubliantly glow
Making everything composed
Melting every malignant
soul
When raised in a delicate stroke
Marvellous masterpieces flow
When it tries to level with eyes
Influx of feelings and proud suffice
Few times it does task and busy
And sometimes lays neglected being lazy
It needs a touch to be active at moment
Let special one end it’s yearning at present
If you understand its significance
You never raise it without giving it substance
Best is to keep them compact and sound
As it have crucial jobs all around
As it have crucial jobs all around
Guessing what it is which so varied
It’s part of you all described
Yes, your "hands" are so special
That are mighty two and surely vital
Linking with Poetry Jamm, Two Shoes In Texas-Sacred, SOCS-Present & 3WWW #404
ABC Wednesday for the Letter H for Hold , Hands.
@Sonal
ABC Wednesday for the Letter H for Hold , Hands.
@Sonal
Oh, I really enjoyed this! What a clever approach. Your poem made me think of everything that hands do. Hands are very integral to so many things we do and experience in life. Always good to see you at Poetry Jam!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Mary for your kind words. Even I enjoy very much reading Poetry Jam entries, learning more :)
DeleteSo well done. Congratulations
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by John.
DeleteSo uplifting... thank you.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the blog Laurie, keep visiting :)
DeleteI really enjoyed this poem. I'm not so good with riddles, but it was very well done. Thank you for sharing it for SoCS. :)
ReplyDeleteRiddle word itself keeps our senses active, so a different approach to prompt, Thanks for appreciation.
DeleteI like the riddle format.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked Donna, keep dropping by :)
DeleteThe riddle was fun and I did guess by the end! Thanks for visiting my blog as well.
ReplyDeletePeggy, the answer was obvious for Poetry Jam entries, but tried to hide it till end :) . Loved your blog, sure I will drop by soon.
DeleteClever poem, well done.
ReplyDeleteYou mentioning clever, means my riddle was success :))
DeleteLovely use of the SoCS prompt! :)
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DeleteVery nice riddle x
ReplyDeleteThank you !
DeleteThis was a very clever take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteA creative approach hands are capable of many tasks..
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by.
DeleteA riddle in a poem is a good spin.
ReplyDeleteJust thought of something different....thank you for stopping by.
DeleteRefreshing and fun. A whiff of freshness from the usual verses that we have. Wonderful write MS!
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Thank You Kaykuala.
DeleteThis was lovely Sonal, and I was delighted to have you join us at Two Shoes Tuesday! It is amazing, when we stop to consider very ordinary things like hands, how many things their actions impact, they can be lifted up for good or risen in anger and strife. Better that we join hands together and walk this journey called life! I hope we'll see you again with us next week! :-)
ReplyDeleteI am equally delighted to be a part of Two Shoes Tuesday.Thank you for appreciating.
DeleteLiked the poem. Very clever to make it a riddle.
ReplyDeleteThanks for appreciating....keep visiting.
DeleteNice riddle, nice reading poem. I wasn't thinking with all think engines but though just maybe it was your Bible and your Prayers. That came from me sighting your top "Most Loved Ones" entry. It fit, sort of.
ReplyDeleteThank you for peeking in on my little ride through a part of our Old Town and for leaving your nice comment. There are some old and new pretty houses and a nice park also that didn't fit my 'story'. Really though, just one traffic light at the intersection of two State Highways.
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Just jotted down my feelings for the almighty.....Keep Visiting.
DeleteIt was fun how you "manipulated" the words to fashion this poem.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it....Keep Visiting.
DeleteHands are special indeed and powerful when clasped in prayer ~ Thanks for sharing it with us ~
ReplyDeleteEvery body part has its own strengths......Keep Visiting
DeleteInteresting way to attack the prompt, creating a lovely riddle poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nicholas for dropping by.
Deletesmiles....cool approach...our hands carry so much potential, often it comes down to how we choose to use them.....
ReplyDeleteExactly Brian it all depends on the way we put them to use.
DeleteGive a round of applause (clap hands) for the poem!
ReplyDeleteROG, ABCW
Thank you Roger, liked the way you appreciated :)
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