I don't wanna listen,
And don't wanna brighten.
Just wanna be quiet,
Listening to Inner Ocean.
Never wish to hurt someone,
By dropping sense while drunk.
Want to be calm and silent,
As words of anger could be blunt.
I’m not being lethargic,
Just heeding soul music.
There’s surely an answer,
A prayer that will conquer.
Often silence could be a partner,
An everlasting pal round the corner.
Have heap of topics to hear and share,
Also slowly soothes away despair.
Loudness is all-around,
Scorches ears with high sound.
Just along with my quietness,
I see the world again with brightness.
I see the world again with brightness.
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Do you wear such masks of Quietness?
Does such act gives you peace within or you feel the urge to say something?
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Linking with Poetry Jam - Quiet, 3WWW #405, Two Shoe Tuesday #108
@Sonal
Does such act gives you peace within or you feel the urge to say something?
Share your thoughts with us in comments section.
Linking with Poetry Jam - Quiet, 3WWW #405, Two Shoe Tuesday #108
@Sonal
Oh, I do think that silence is often a good partner....better, in fact, than that loudness which is all around. And a person who listens to the inner ocean is a wise one indeed! Nice to see you.
ReplyDeleteYes Mary, inside ocean recites a lot, it's just that we need to silent the outside world. Glad you liked it.
DeleteWe do need these quiet sequences periodically so as to reconnect to our inner selves.
ReplyDeleteTrue Gabriella, periodic listening to self helps to resolve many critical issues.
DeleteI could so relate to this poem, Sonal. I work in a noisy environment where phones ring all day long. How love the quiet and night to collect my thoughts. Saturday mornings are my favorite time of week, there is not a single noise in the house but the purring of cats and the clicking of my laptop keys! I cannot think in the noise, and sometimes it is very hard to silence it. I think we all long for that place within us that is calm. Lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Josie for kind words. Finding a quiet place becomes a challenge sometimes, but when heart calls for it all background noises goes mute and one listens to soul voice.
DeleteI love the idea of an inner ocean of quiet and glad you can find it even in your loud environment. By the way the source of the photo is me, Peggy Goetz. I guess I forgot to put that on the prompt. Thanks for using my photo.
ReplyDeleteThanks Peggy and I shall surely credit the picture to you. Lovely picture :)
DeleteI specially like this part:
ReplyDeleteOften silence could be a partner,
An everlasting pal round the corner.
Good one ~
Thanks Grace, keep dropping by.
DeleteA beautiful piece of writing! Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteKeep visiting Ramya :)
DeleteNice words, MeenalSonal :)
ReplyDeleteMay we get to listen to our "inner ocean" more often.
Much needed for our peace.
Yes Anita, inner voice is so much needed.
DeleteThe contrast is rather sharp - drunkenness verses calm. Nice.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to blog Margaret, keep dropping often :)
Deletelistening to the inner ocean is a cool thought....as we are made up of water....
ReplyDeleteand the tides within us....def you play up the contrast nicely in this...
Thanks a bunch Brian. True, we are made up of water, and we all hope to sail smoothly, unless emotion tides carries us away.
DeleteThat's so beautiful...
ReplyDeleteLoved the rhyming too..;-)
Thank you for appreciating!
DeleteBeautiful words MinalSonal. Yes. We all need to listen to our inner ocean right now and stay calm
ReplyDeleteThe outer chaos can sometimes misguide us so listening to inner voice can come to our rescue.
DeleteWhen we go quiet, we can hear more. Your poem tells us just that.Wise words.
ReplyDeleteHear more, hear the solution and lastly hear our inner happy mind.
DeleteSilence speaks a lot and it's important to listen to your inner conscious !!
ReplyDeleteBeing silent is just rejuvenation of our soul.
DeleteKeeping quite and sitting at a quite place is what's what' me sane. Your poem is good too.
ReplyDeleteListening to inner voice is only possible when we are silent.
DeleteListening to the inner voice is really important we really need to be safe to sail in the ocean of life...
ReplyDeleteSometimes it gives a very different angle to ponder.
DeleteYes I do buddy more often than not, it feels good at times undoubtedly
ReplyDeleteYes it is a great refreshment.
DeleteWell-written. Very thoughtful piece of writing. We all need to listen to our inner ocean
ReplyDeleteInner voice has the ability to curb many problems.
DeleteI'm someone who loves the power of silence. It allows us to introspect and hear to our the voices deep inside us.
ReplyDeleteYes this is what it's power lies.
DeleteA beautiful peace. Great message in few words. We can win the heart by quieting when it is needed a lot. Sometimes silence speaks louder than words.
ReplyDeleteA spark in silence cannot be compared.
DeleteFor me, silence has been a good friend as I love to sit in a room in silence and then enjoy the beauty of birds chirping around.
ReplyDeleteYou have a great friend indeed!
DeleteA very nice poem. As it says silence speaks louder then words. Sometimes silence is a best way of inner introspection and to deep dive in once inner self..
ReplyDeleteSilence can make way to attain what one wants.
DeleteLove the poem.. Sitting calmly in a corner brings out the inner happiness.
ReplyDeleteCalling inner self is very important.
DeleteVery true.
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