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Sunday, 9 November 2014

Wit Enlightens - Shadorma

Deep Hidden 
No way to be seen 
Open mind 
Bit of wit 
Dream alleyway surely creep 
Just grab it on time 



My first attempt in Shadorma, which is a poetic form that consists of 6 lines stanza. Click Shadorma link to know more about it.


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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 November 2014 at 04:05

    "Open mind" is the key, I think.

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    1. MeenalSonal12 November 2014 at 11:36

      Yes George, open mind can solve many unsaid questions too.

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  2. Anonymous10 November 2014 at 06:13

    Welcome to the world of shadorma!
    I like this phrase -- the dream alleyway - very nice!

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    1. MeenalSonal12 November 2014 at 11:37

      Happy you liked it. Shall come up with more Shadorma poetry soon :)

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  3. Bastet's Waka Library10 November 2014 at 15:05

    Lovely shadorma ... really enjoyed your piece very much ... and thanks for your participation!

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  4. Unknown11 November 2014 at 20:18

    The poem conveys so much in six lines! Lovely!!

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    1. MeenalSonal12 November 2014 at 11:39

      Saying in few words was little tough, but finally made it. Keep visiting Usha Menon

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  5. Roohi Bhatnagar13 November 2014 at 18:10

    Very deep and so very good..

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Your each word matters! So drop a word or two :)