Deep Hidden
No way to be seen
Open mind
Bit of wit
Dream alleyway surely creep
Just grab it on time
My first attempt in Shadorma, which is a poetic form that consists of 6 lines stanza. Click Shadorma link to know more about it.
@Meenal
"Open mind" is the key, I think.
ReplyDeleteYes George, open mind can solve many unsaid questions too.
DeleteWelcome to the world of shadorma!
ReplyDeleteI like this phrase -- the dream alleyway - very nice!
Happy you liked it. Shall come up with more Shadorma poetry soon :)
DeleteLovely shadorma ... really enjoyed your piece very much ... and thanks for your participation!
ReplyDeleteThank you Georgia.
DeleteThe poem conveys so much in six lines! Lovely!!
ReplyDeleteSaying in few words was little tough, but finally made it. Keep visiting Usha Menon
DeleteVery deep and so very good..
ReplyDeleteThank you Roohi for appreciating !
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