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Tuesday, 16 September 2014

Moments

The swaying lacy curtains reflection in Tina's mirror took her in past journey.

Her mother used to stitch frocks for her with beautiful intricate frills and laces on every birthday; reminding her happy moments.

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Soon the charming face filled with grief when she remembers the day when she lost her mother; that was last year.

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After all guests left she started opening her birthday gifts that she got; she opened the last packet to find a frock just her mother used to stitch.


Where did it come from?


 This post is for Five Sentence Fiction - Grief & Friday Fictioneers

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5 comments:

  1. P.S. Joshi16 September 2014 at 16:32

    Meena, That would be quite a mystery. Well written. : ) ---Susan

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    1. MeenalSonal17 September 2014 at 15:05

      Thanks Mr Joshi mystery is always interesting and we could always feel our loved ones presence in life.Keep visiting.

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  2. Anonymous16 September 2014 at 20:02

    P.S.Joshi - I like your 5 sentence fiction you submitted for Friday Flash Fiction. I can feel Tina's grief over the loss of her mother on a new birthday after Mom's death. Wow, this is powerful and good! My mother used to make my twin sister and I new dresses to wear to school the next day (yes she dressed us like twins even though we are fraternal) - at least until we went to college. Very well written!
    Nan :)

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  3. Cifar18 September 2014 at 18:42

    mother's love always remain with their children

    My Entry Courage

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